Internet and intranet sites with news on their front pages often feature short introductions to the articles. Readers are then expected to click through and read the full text.
It follows that writers and editors need to make these introductory blurbs or teasers as enticing as possible, to encourage click-throughs.
Like any advertisement, your blurb can either show people why they should read on, or it can tell them.
Showing would mean describing what they’ll find when they click through. Telling might mean assuring the reader it will be worth their time.
Telling might involve saying “this fascinating article…” is “unmissable” … “essential reading” … “a scoop”.
Telling people why they need to read your article can be highly effective, but is hazardous for the following reasons:
1) People might not believe your blurb. Readers are used to big claims about what they’ll find when they click a link, and may treat them with scepticism.
2) You risk inflating the language. If you describe an article as “essential”, how are you going to describe the next article and still hold your readers’ attention? “More essential”?
3) You risk disappointing the reader, thereby diminishing your future credibility. If the reader decides an article you told them is wonderful is in fact a woeful mess, they’re less likely to believe other claims on your site.
The bottom line? Use big claims sparingly. Show people why they might be interested in your post more often than telling them they will be.
You can read more about blurbs on this weblog here.
And there’s good advice from Poynter here.